“Some people say that ‘Money makes the world go round’; other say that ‘Money is the root of all evil’. Which of these do yoy agree with?”
A very important instrument to exchange services is the money, we are very used to use euroes to buy anything. Some people really hate the money, they feel it as a evil invention, but I am not agree. In this essay I will explain why money is essential for our world.
First of all, euros or dollars are simple instrument in which we exchange money for services. If we imagine a very primitive world, where humans were nomads and they did not have our coins for buying food, it is probably that they use other objects as money such as weapons or animals. In that civilizantion that I have described they have money, not metal coins, but they are trading with objects like we do with money. It is easy to understand that we are using euros or dollars becuase it is the simplest way and we naturally tend to have a economy.
Secondly, economy is a fair instrument where the people decide the value of the money. I mean, if I start a store in which I sell animal food, I can decide the prize of my products, and the society are free to buy or not. It is a very smart solution, because the society gives the value to the products, it is a self-organized instrument. Therefore, money solves a lot of problems, becuase it is a fair instrument to buy or sell services and products.
To sum up, I am agree to use money in our society becuase it is a instrument that we have used for a very long time. It is a very useful instrument that allows people to buy or sell products at the price they desire, making it a fair tool.
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Estructura:
- Introducción
- Es una herramienta inteligente y justa para poner el precio a las cosas. Naturalmente vamos a llegar a algo parecido al dinero, porque es lo más simple.
- El precio del dinero se decide automaticamente por la gente.
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- Household chores
- I disagree….… NO I AM AGREE OR I AM NOT AGREE.
- Thick -> Grueso
- Thick skin -> No se ofence con facilidad… piel gruesa
- By my own.
- Haunted: encantado.
- Devil advocate: Abogado del diablo
- I partly agree with the statement.
- Más delgado: thiner
Lo importante del speaking del toefl no es tener la razón, sino expresar bien el inglés… esto es que te puedes inventar tu opinión.
Problema con los verbos:
- do martial arts.… sport, motocross, yoga, pilates
- play more or less teams sports o sports with ball, instruments.… football, basketball, games, padel tennis.
- go para deportes que terminen en ing… swiming skiing
NO NO NO SE dice practise. Solo if you are practising specific skills.